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SYTYCW: Off to the Races

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It was a long weekend in this writer’s house.

There was a lot of frantic revising. More than one navel-gazing, woe-is-me social media post. And even some tears.

But in the end, I loaded up my chapter to the So You Think You Can Write contest entry form and hit publish.

After all, what do I have to lose? At worst I suffer a little public humiliation. But you’re talking to the girl who just performed a face plant in the middle of her open-plan office. Humiliation is the name of my game.

At best, I end up with a publishing contract.

And at the very least, I get all the motivation I need to finish this thing.

So far, reviews have been good.

“I love the humor in this, and spicy it is,” said one reader.

“I can’t believe the shy and sweet Amber Page wrote this awesome filth,” said another.

A third said, simply, “RAWRRR!”

In case you hadn’t guessed, it is in fact quite spicy. After all, the whole premise of the story is based on a one night stand. A little sexy time is required.

All that to say…if you know me, and are uncomfortable knowing how filthy my mind can get, you may want to skip the second to the last scene. Or even the whole thing. I promise not to be offended.

Still with me? Alright.

Enjoy the first chapter of Winner Takes All. And feel free to leave me a comment when you’re done. The editors may or may not be taking comments into account when choosing the 50 submissions that will make the first cut.

Here’s hoping that this is just the beginning of  the journey and NOT the end of my story.

Fingers and toes crossed.

SYTYCW: The First Page

Four days in to my romance novel writing extravaganza, I have a little over 7,000 words written (not all of them good). Two days into this bit of insanity, I sent my first page off for consideration in the “First Page Challenge,” where So You Think You Can Write editors critiqued a random assortment of entries.

Mine wasn’t chosen. Which is okay, because, well, that’s scary.

But since I was ready to commit it to the public viewing space I decided to post it here. Like it or not, I’m taking you all on this writing adventure with me!

So here we go. The first page of Winner Takes All, by yours truly.


Her little red dress had seemed far too revealing when she put it on, but now that she was face-to-face with her competition, Becky worried she hadn’t gone far enough.

From where she stood in the hotel’s white marble hallway, staring through the open ballroom doors at the party swirling inside, the women looked more like Victoria’s Secret runway models than the advertising executives she knew they were.

Becky reached into the ridiculously small clutch currently masquerading as a purse and pulled out her phone.

“Standing outside party. Can’t make myself go in. Help!!!” she texted.

Seconds later, her phone pinged.

“Get your butt moving, girlie! Mr. One Night Stand isn’t going to fall in your lap!”

“Can’t. The people in that room are scary,” she fired back.

“Just picture them standing in their underwear…then stalk the guy that makes you drool.”

Becky giggled, then slid the phone back into her purse.

“Right. Underwear,” she said to herself. “Must picture delicious looking men in underwear. I can do that.”

She jumped as a masculine voice sounded from behind her.

“Well, if you’re looking for volunteers, I happen to be wearing what I feel is a rather good looking undergarment.”

“What?” she yelped, whirling to face the interloper. Then her heart stopped. The man smirking at her was the living, breathing definition of delicious, from the tips of his artfully rumpled black hair to the toes of his polished leather shoes.

What do you think?

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